The Icicle – A Microstory

Its crystalesque quality is emphasised by the light of the sun.

Warmth lures it out of its frozen slumber; it is fooled into believing the golden rays protect it.

But the icicle, new and fresh, does not yet know life’s cruel games.

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About Donna-Louise Bishop

I'm a freelance reporter and creative writing tutor living in the beautiful county of Norfolk UK. I blog. Wife to Ben, mummy of two young boys. Cake rocks.
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12 Responses to The Icicle – A Microstory

  1. inquisitivegeet says:

    Yes, it never does and it never will!
    Very written!

    Cheers

    • Donna-Louise Bishop says:

      Thank you. It was a very different style for me this week and took a lot of tweaking – especially for so few words! Although that’s probably why I had to fiddle so much.

  2. theinnerzone says:

    “Warmth lures it out of its frozen slumber..”
    Lovely!

  3. A cruel twist. Can’t exist with out the sun and yet must be destroyed by it.

  4. Joe Ormerod says:

    The sun is NOT your friend…just ask Frosty!

  5. d3athlily says:

    Oh, that poor icicle! It will soon join my Ice Queen in its hatred of the sun. It is a cruel thing.

  6. Tina says:

    The sun is indeed cruel. I liked the picture!

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