The Party (Yeah Write #248 – Microstory)

His hand slid under the back of her top and stroked the soft skin below her bra strap.

No one saw them, hidden away in the secluded corner of her best mate’s flat.

“Some party,” he whispered.

She wouldn’t remember a thing.

About Donna-Louise Bishop

I'm a writer, freelance reporter, creative writing tutor, and blogger, living in the beautiful county of Norfolk UK. In my spare time I am also a wife, a mother to three boys, and a human washing machine.
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14 Responses to The Party (Yeah Write #248 – Microstory)

  1. d3athlily says:

    That is so haunting. Omg. What a disgusting individual. 😵

  2. oh no :/ and i hate how this can be so true :/

  3. Well that is chilling! Jerk.

  4. Michaela Mitchell says:

    Oh wow. Well written but UGH, disgusting.

  5. jhiabeys says:

    You’ve captured a sadly contemporary topic well in so few words.

  6. mrsclark6 says:

    I’ve been thinking about your entry since I read it earlier this week. That’s what true good writing is! Such a vivid picture…

    • Donna-Louise Bishop says:

      Thank you so much for that feedback. It means a lot. I developed the idea quite a bit and it moved from one idea to another really naturally, but needed a lot of work to make it have a decent impact. I’m glad that extra work was appreciated. Thanks for reading!

  7. Joe Ormerod says:

    So well executed, as a father of a daughter it gave me chills! Glad it placed so highly, well done!!!

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