It grows inside you;
Angry cells multiplying
too quickly to stop.
I’d love to see a title that adds to these three lines.
I debated long and hard about whether or not to add a title. I think you are right though. I may add one after a think tonight 😊
A title is valuable real estate to be developed. It will add context and depth, especially with such a short poem.
Thanks for your earlier advice. I’ve now decided on a title.
Wow… so haunting. It’s a frightening subject. hope everything is okay! Xoxo
Thanks Melony. I hope so too x
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